I love going to the beach, I go there every weekend. Last weekend was horrific,. The weather forecast said that the weather willwould be very cold in the coming days, the. The weather was at first mild in the morning. I told myself it seemed that this iswas the right time to take a rest away from work and study , so I toldasked my friend to go with me. on TheIn the beginning, he haddid not agree, but in the end, he accepted,we went and when. When we arrived, the weather startingstarted to beget bad. , however I still decided to swim in the sea . After I had jumped in to the sea, I felt very cold, so I left and went home. and theThe next day I gothad a cold. It was the worst weekend,. I wish I heardlistened to my friend's words ,. I was very angry at the time. But, but I still love to go to the beach.

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