Best day of my life
I decided to write about my day in the amusement park in Finland. It was one of the best days of my life.
My best day
has started seven years ago in a Finland hotel. I had the best breakfast ever. There was a lot of free food and good coffee with a biscuit. Then I went to the amusement park. I saw it from a long distance because there was a high loophole. When we came closer we saw a roller coaster and lots of different types of attractions. After we got in we put on some bracelets and then we split up. Firstly, I went to visit a bar and I bought some bottles of water. Then I meetmet with my friends and we trytried some not very funny attractions. After few hours we found roller casterscoasters and other big and cool-lookingcool looking attractions. Firstly, we have tried a small roller coaster if my friends will handle the big. It was awesome, so then we tried a big one. That huge roller coaster was the best thing in this park.
I am feeling really good when I am thinking about that day. It was my best day and also a week in Finland.

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