On page 141, you will find the writer’s reference talking about word choice. Looking back on paper rater, it stated that I struggled with word choice. Moving forward, I need to expand my word choices so that therethey are not repeating themselvesrepeated. My feedback would be that I agree with the statement. Since, as the grading part was low, and the words did not flow well together. Next time, when writing, some modification would be looking back at the book as a reference. To, to guide me with what words to consider puttingusing in the paper. The next feedback I received is that my paper showed low sentence structure. It is agreeableI agree that I need to expand my sentences next time. I would also need to use more adverbs and adjectives to make my sentencesentences more detailed.