It all started with a knock on the door.
It was already past midnight and most of my family was asleep.
I opened the door and saw one of the most beautiful girls I had ever seen.
She had long
, light brown hair, hazel brown eyes and was wearing a simple black dress which showed her slender waistline, as well asand her beautiful long legs, off perfectly.
I just stood there in silence for a moment, taking in every
secondinch of her beauty.

“Uhm, hello?”

I was instantly pulled back to reality
, as the girl started to speak.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to disturb you,” she apologized.

“No, it’s not a problem, really,” I assured her.
“Uhm.
. . Cancan I help you with something?”

“Yeah, I’m looking for Trent.

I just hope I got the address right.
I’ve never actually visited before, you see,” she replied, with a shy smile.

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