It is said that a stable source of income is the foundation of every family’s happiness, which is why most modern families have both parents working, but some people argue that the time spent to get extra income affects the family negatively and does more harm than good.

The main advantage of both parents working is they will make more money and consequently afford good health care, have a better education, and be able to buy luxurious things. Also, children will learn to be more independent and develop good time-management skills.


First of all, due to the parents' busy schedule, they won’t be able to do a regular evaluation of their children’s development and provide them with adequate guidance and support which can lead to the children feeling neglected and lost
. andAnd this may have a negative impact on their lives. Secondly, children won't be able to see their parents during their childhood often, so the family ties will be weak.

In conclusion, I believe that it is the responsibility of parents to make sure that their children grow up to be healthy
, functional adults, even if it means that they won't be able to afford luxurious and unnecessary things.

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