Subject line: My presentation

Hi Mr. Smith,

THANK YOU FOR YOUR EMAILThank you for your email inviting me to present my company’s new software program to ABC Global’s Head Office. I am so honored and excited by the opportunity! :)

I do not want to be too demanding, but there are a few questions I still have about the audience and length of the presentation. I know I should not bother you with these problems
, of course, and I will try figure these out myself.

I am making the final arrangements for this presentation, and I must ask profusely that I am given all the
requested details I require. Do you thinkWould you canplease have your secretary send me these, dear?to me?

Just to clarify that the presentation will be on
09-06-16_______.

HopeI hope to hear from you soonest!soon!

Shirley

CEO, Temple Software

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