THE STRANGE NIGHT
One
daynight at 9:00 p.m., my parents said totold me to go to the bed to sleep because the next day I willhad to go to school so I went to bedthe next day, so I did. After three hours, I woke up onto a strange sound, the sound was like somebody opening a door but slowly, and at thisAt that moment I thought that, there was a thief in our house. I got my Nerf sniper toy, and I walked slowly after the strange sound till I noticed that thisthe sound was coming from the kitchen, and I saw a scary shadow. At that moment, I was ready to fight anyone, even if he iswas bigger than me. I breathedtook a long breath and I, entered the kitchen like a lion, and I saw my brother there, drinking water.

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