Hi,
I' haveI just gotrecieved your e-mail. It is cool that you are going to that event! I have got some advicedadvice for you,. I hope you will find it helpful.
I was
on the birthdaywith my grandma on her birthday yesterday. She is 80 years old. I taketook part in this event and it was amazing. ThereAll the were all family was there. I could talkedtalk with everyone.
You should wear
the elegant clothsclothes. For example nice dress. And remember, you should wear comfortable shooseshoes.
I would prefer you would give
the money foras the present rather than buy something. IfThat way, he or she gave money she/ he wouldcan buy what she wantis wanted.
Please write to me and
youI will sentsend the photo from this evenevent. I am looking forward to responsingyour response.
Love, take care.

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