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Problem with doctors.

The doctorsDoctors are very busy. They must help so many people every day, so they are also very tired. Weary doctors can often makes a lot ofmake mistakes, patient can beputting their patients in danger. The reason is that there isare not enaugh docenough doctors.

The solution ofto this problem is that the government should riseraise doctors' salarysalaries. ThereThen, there will be more people who want to be a doctordoctors, because they can earn more.
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Also, in our country there is too little ofare not enough medical schools. Young studentstudents can't choose this career. But if we willsince we have more technical schools, they'll often go tochoose this work instead.

Another option is that the chemist should have tohaving chemists examine patients onin the pharmacy. If the problem will beis serious, the patient will gothen be sent to the doctor. That should help solve a problem with too crowdedof overcrowded hospitals.

My last proposal is that there should be more private surgerysurgeries. People don't like to wait in the queue, so they alsocould pay for aan appointment, and they don'twouldn't have to stay in the hospital.

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