Hi Holiday Disasters.

Last summer
, I was in New York with my boyfriend. We were visiting this citowny.
One day
, we went on a trip to a museum. In the subway, attacked us three-headed monster attacked us. I help ed my boyfriend, Percy, to beat him. Then, in the park, we met another monster. He gbreapthed fire, and spiats lava. He It burnedt all the grass, but in the end, it was overcaome.

Later
, it wasgot even worse. All the roladas wasere closed. There were a lot of Police Officers and an ambulance. Q We quickly diasappeared from the plasce of nevents.

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