Ryan!, Wwhat our teacher told us about Imhotemp is completaly FALSE!!!!

Because Imhotep was an Ancient Egyptian architect, sage, and healer,. He was the first advisor of the King Djoser and the Highest Priest at Heliopolis,. whoHe was born as a commoner, and worked ahis way up by his genius.
Imhotep was the first Ancient Egyptian architect known by his name
, and built the oldest known pyramid, the Step Pyramid in Saqqara, which is the oldest of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World. Also, Imhotep was the first physician who realized that the diseases are caused by environmental factors rather than by magic or the gods. His medical works contain information on trauma surgery, anatomy, the diagnosis, treatment, and progress of over 200 medical issues.
The “Ancient Egyptian nerd” was so unique in his time that people started worshiping Imhotep as a medical demigod
, the “Son of Ptah.and hHistorians thought that he was just a mythological figure until the late 19th century, when archeologist C.E. Wilbour discovered the evidence of his existence.

And it seems that she doesn't know a THING about Ancient Sumer and
the Akkadian Empire. She didn't even say anything about Mesopotamian weaponry! Look what I found in our coursebook:,
“Knowledge is Power
.– tThese words are the eternal truth, whether it’s about the modern world or the cradle of human civilization: Ancient Sumer, which was a place of the almost constant wars among the Mesopotamian city-states.
Because of those military conflicts
, Mesopotamians made a huge contribution in creating and developing different weapons and armors. One of those breakthroughs was a composite bow whicthat was created by a local brainiac, Sargon the Great.
He was a self-made man of humble origins
, but was clever enough to come up with a new type o af bow comprised of wood, bone, and animal horns. The bow became way more flexible and powerful comparinged to ordinary bows, which gave archers a huge advantages on a battlefield.
With
this new, innovative weapon, a well-trained army of archers, and an energetic temperament, Sargon conquered all of southern Mesopotamia, parts of Syria, Anatolia, and Elam, and created the first known great empire.

And you know what
,? Thutmose III was not JUST ANOTHER pharaoh in the Ancient Egyptian history, but a very interesting one, as he was the greatest pharaoh of Ancient Egypt, an ingenious and fearless warrior who was always at the head of his army. and bBy launching at least 16 military coamplaigns in Syria, Palestine, Nubia, and Mesopotamia, he amassed Egypt’s wealth, and gained the complete respect of Egypt and the entire region. For his achievements, Thutmose III was highly revered during his reign and for a long time after his death.
An accomplished statesman, horseman, athlete, archer, and a military genius,
Thutmose III was a fair-minded, discriminating patron of the arts and. usHed to studyied botanics, collected different flowers during his military campaigns, moadel glass vessels, and set up a number of obelisks and beautiful temples around Egypt.

And those people are meant to TEACH US?! Uhhh!!!

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