These days, using the computer is very common for everyone., although children are using the computer very dependently. Some people think that children should use the computer because they learn lots of things but in my opinion, I believe that children should use the computer and be involvinged in sports activities.
Nowadays, computer, notebooks
, and mobile phones play an important role for children.t
T
here are numberous of different of ways in whatich I believe children should use the computer.
The most significant reason isfor using the computer is helping them to improve their mental abilities;. f
F
or example,:
- For
solving problems,
- For
improvements in maths and understanding instructions.a

A
nother connected reason is computer has different games to play and they improve their thinking power; f.
F
or example,:
-
iIt helps them to creative things and hmaving theaining concentration.

Besides, playing sports and outside activities make
s everyone strong and physically fit and it's playing thea
secondary positive role for children.
A linked reason is that playing sports is good for children because playing sport develops skills, metabolisms, and physical health.
In additional, sports activities helps them to have a good behaviour and being social pblerson.
In conc
lusion, playing sport and using the computer should be toghther, not separtley.
I hope parents and schools notices about this and try to useing the computer and sports acitivies in their daily activities .

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