Please correct the following text grammatically for me.

"
The Humanhuman doesn't live happy in any
Ciramstancecircumstance."
Aristotle once said that if the
worldworld's problems are accumulatewere accumulated and dividedivided among all humans equally so, they willwould consider the present problem bigger than the past one.
Someone has beautifully
aurgedargued that if we exchange our problems with one another, then Everyoneeveryone will consider their own problemproblems easy and simple.
So I was thinking about
the aboutthese sayings
and slept. I dreamed about the king palace where advertisement was published that everyone bring their problems into the palace. People started to bring their problems and left
them in a heap on the floor. I was standing in the corner while enjoying the show. One came after another and threw their load off the head. Soon, the load burden of problems were accumulated so much that they risedrose higher than the clouds.

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