''Taking everything into account, I greatly believe that I will excel in the Officer Candidate School and make an exceptional officer at USDF dueowing to the aforementioned traits that I possess. I am capable of furthering my responsibilities, and I am pursuing this opportunity because I want to contribute more to this establishment by becoming a Commissioned Officer. This ranking will help me become more than the best; it will make me an excellent role model for the NCOs and show them what they should strive to become. I gain an immense sense of satisfaction by helping others, and thus will use my position to guide my subordinates for them to achieve greatness and push them to use their full potential. I will never stop endeavoring for the betterment of myself and those around me.

To me, an Officer is someone who maintains a professional bearing, someone who inspires their fellow soldiers, and someone who has a positive and powerful influence on others. Instilling guidance, respect, and leadership is something that all leaders should be doing in thise military. At the moment, I can confidently say that I know how to lead others and therefore I absolutely know that I have what it takes to be an Officer in USDF. Qualities of an officer are in my nature; such as tenacity, self-efficacy, hard work ethic, leadership and an appetite for learning. These are the attributes that allow me to lead by example and, takbe precautionus with every judgment I make, and wilenable make as a prtosp bectivome a Commissioned Officer.''

Hey! This is a part of an Expression of Interest for a position in a game I play that simulates real-life US military. PLEASE take real care, in this, as it means a lot to me. I want it to be formal so please try to replace some words with more complex one. I'm planning to subscribe if left satisfied.