Iman Campbell
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Writing Process, Part 1




a. A trip to the ocean can be a relaxing escape from everyday pressure. b. You should always be careful to avoid overexposure to the sun at the beach.

Punctuation, capitalization, spelling
, and grammar
a. A phrase or opinion that is overused and betrays a lack of original
thoughtsthought.
b. Mr. Campbell loves the desertdessert bar at the buffet, he’s like a kid at thea candy store.
Freewriting
, is a form of writing whatever comes to mind, nonstop, without making any spelling or grammar corrections. Researching, is when information is gathered from more than one source of information .
I wakeI wake up and get in the shower. Then, then I brush my teeth and, get dressed, and do my hair. Next, EatI eat breakfast, and watch the morning news. Then I getI then grab my lunch bag. Get, get in my car, and drive to work. ClockWhen I get to work, I clock in and get to workstarted working.
It is very important that I getobtain my high school diploma., so that I will be able to further my education. I will also, will be able to get a better paying job, so that I can provide for my family. I will be able to go in so many directiondirections if I get my high school diploma. College is an option or Technical College. In order to apply for a job, you have to have ana high school diploma. College is not for everyone, but you can apply for a job with an high school diploma. Getting my diploma is very important to me and the out come of my future.

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