I think that the old manteacher was in the right when he hit that boy. Clearly, the boy was being very rude and cursing at the man., so the man beat uppunched the boy. The teacher tried to keep calm, and even told the boy to walk away, but the boy just didn't stop. So, the teacher had his phone in his hand and swung his fist at the boy's face., and that's when the fight started. Well the

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first reason is that the boy wanted to fight., and the man shouldn't of gothave gotten that mad causebecause he is a teacher. butBut, then again, I wouldwould've too. I don't think the teacher should have gone to jail. heHe was just putting the boy in his place. The second reason was that the teacher was old. Hean adult, and he felt offended, so he stood up tofor what he felt was right. Old peopleElders can have really bad tempers. They know best and it's best not to mess with them. The third reason is that the boy was saying racist wordsusing racial slurs and being very judgmental. The boy was upset about something., and the way it looks the man didn't seem like he did something that bad. ButStill, the boy started yelling and taunting the man so the man hit the boy.

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